Are you the one?

 

Stressed-Damaged Heart!

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I can’t deny it, no point in trying to hide it

Ya you’re the one who brings those sparkling smiles to my face, That glistening shine to my eyes

But it’s true I fear something, If I am to get anymore attached or fall for you so hard I black out

Will you leave me there crying alone without a goodbye, Or dip the first chance you get out?

 

Yes, it is true you tell me many things that one should take as assurance

But the words spoken from your lips are not only yours alone

Some have yet to be spoken, Others previously told

 

But when it all comes down to it, This is what I can’t help but think at times…

Now I did not commit a crime, These are just some thoughts that run through my mind…

 

If I were forced to be with another guy, I would push myself to suicide

If I were forced to see you go and die, I would go before you hoping you would survive

 

My breaths of inhale is for you, Exhaling is for “us”

But are you with me for like or for lust, A booty call or true trust?

 

Know something…

 

I’d put my life on the line for you,

Sacrifice my soul to the devil

 

And because of you…

 

Now my life is so amazingly breathe taking,

Mind boggling,

And at times even heart stopping

 

I wanna know now, Do you fell how I’m feeling?

Are you truly down for me?

Or did you just decide to settle with choice number three?

 

I just hope that when the moment of truth comes, you have the heart to be true to me,

And not hurt nor decisive me!

 

By: Rose .D. Montes

5/5/08

 

 

 

 S:Trying to figure out the true feelings for the person she’s with and wondering if he really does like her.

O:For  the fact that she was confused.

A:People who need to take the time and think about the person that they are with why their with them, is it for the wrong/right reasons, and is it a good choice to stay in the relationship.

P:To show you that love isn’t easy to find and you might not even know it if it were to stare you in the eye everyday.

S:I am a girl in a state of confusion about the guy she’s with.

TONE:confused, skeptical, and unsure.

3 Comments

  1. Wow rose did you write this poem your self its really deep =] is this peom based upon something you went through personally i just want to know but. other than that its really good and id love to publish it on day.
    -Tiana

  2. Wow Rose. Thank you for sharing such an intimate poem. You are such a Juliet! :)
    If I can give you any advice it is this— love “moderately” as Friar Lawrence said to Romeo in Act 2. Mankind will most likely disappoint us if we give them everything we are too soon. Wait until you are married to this boy before you offer him so much of your soul. I promise, if you do this, you will not regret it. And if you don’t, you most assuredly will regret it. And once you give away a piece of your soul or all of it for that matter, you never really get it back the same way. Your future husband deserves more than that. Don’t give him leftovers from the boys before him who didn’t care about you as much as he will.

    love,

    Ms. M


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